Long, long ago, mysterious forces created the Land of Equestria that we know and love.
When the universe was young and empty there lived two beings of pure energy.
The power they held within their very souls could rend worlds apart just as easily as they
could create worlds from nothing. They were the elder sisters.
With a mere thought their power could supersede the very laws of physics put in place by
nature, and be manipulated to meet their whims.
They truly were the lords of their realm.
And within one fateful momentit was decided collectively between them that a world shall
A world inhabited by creatures in their image
A world that they would rule thoughtfully and fairly
A world known universally as a world of peace and beauty
A world that would be free from evil and hatred
A world that was perfect
A world called Equestria.
And perfect it was. Beautiful spectacles one could only dream of were created from black
murky nothingness with careless ease and focused sorcery. The sisters worked tirelessly for
days, months, years, eons to make this world a paragon of perfection. A flawless
representation of their own imaginations. They created the sun, a source of warmth, light,
and energy during the day; to be controlled by the eldest sister. They created the moon, an
eerie and haunting beauty that adorned the night sky; to be controlled by the youngest
They gave their subjects everything they could possibly need or want. Yes, it truly was
But was it really?
Was there no flaw in their plan?
Nothing could flow this smoothly, no matter how powerful you are.
When free will exists, problems will follow
And this story is not without its problems.
When one became jealous, a thread was pulled from the fabric of reality. The flow of time
and the everpresent omnipotence of space began to falter. Something had changed. And that
change was within none other, then the youngest sister. A feeling of hatred brewed within
the younger, a feeling of jealousy, neglect, and pure rage.
The feelings festered and grew stronger within the body of the younger, she focused them
towards her eldest sister. It wasn't fair! Why was she ignored by the puny creatures she had
created! HOW DARE THEY PAY NO MIND TO HER BEAUTIFUL SKY, HER DARK AND MYSTERIOUS NIGHT, HER
PURE AND FLAWLESS MOON! HOW DARE THEY.
This wasn't perfect
It wasn't perfect...
It will never be perfect...
No one should be this ungrateful
No one deserves this kind of treatment, this ignorance
It's not fair
It will never be fair for her
Is she not royalty?
Is she not good enough?
Her sister gets all of the glory as she works tirelessly through the night
Providing cool air for your thankless and useless bodies
Providing daytime for the nocturnal and rest for the masses
Is she a fake to you?
A lesser being?
She is still a princess.
And she will take what is rightfully hers.
Read this during the tempo increased part. I wish I could animate, if I could I'd depict the
massive fight between Luna and Celestia.
[The fight begins,
two sisters torn apart by hate
one willing, one reluctant.
To put the youngest in her place,
to save their perfect world's fate,
to restore peace,
to do what is right.
It is hard to imagine fighting your own sister
sealing her within her own creation
for a millennium
it isn't fair
for either of them
but to truly teach this lesson of love and tolerance
acceptance and serenity
one must do what is necessary
to win the fight
even if it means hurting someone you love.]
Twilight thought it would be interesting to go back in time and personally witness the creation of Equestria.
However, what she found was a bit more than she could handle alone...or at all.
Poor twilight. :(
A little sloppy, but it's done.
The loose and weird narritive:
There is a realm above our own, one that transcends all known planes of existence.
This realm is the Derpy Realm > Cosmic Derpy chills there > She was watching Cosmic Seinfeld and was eating some cosmic muffins > She dropped one > it feel into the Regular Realm > That cosmic muffin grew into Equestria > Ponies started growing on the muffin too > Everybody’s happy > The End
Folky acoustic tune sort of based off a story I wrote about Luna and Celestia's childhood: http://kenjibeast.deviantart.com/art/Two-Sisters-243788151
Otherwise there's not much too it, enjoy!
Anything is better than this rain,
But I must confess, I must confess….
It’s about time for a little change...
That’s the art of the dress
Stitch by stitch….
Sewing together a universe…
Making sure the fabric of spacetime…
I’ll put the stars in the sky,
Get the constellation’s just right,
A big old sun to burn at day,
And a moon to watch us sleep at night
Will the human race ever be so intelligent to create other intelligent, if not, sentient species? And if so, will they grant them freedom, or will they use them for their own agendas, be it "good" or "bad" ones.
Based on this fanfic: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-rage-of-two-sisters.html
A chiptune but with epic bad voice acting vocals (I pitch shifted my voice to get Celestia. Luna is vanilla, though).
I did this in 2 seconds.
THIS PAGE IS SO FUCKING LONG AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
(and now it should be really wide too lol)
So I've had a busy week, and didn't get this finished, but I wanted to post it in its current state anyway.
The idea is that Equestria was created with blood, sweat and tears in the industrial revolution. So I tried sampling some Rammstein.
It's far from done, it needs some samples of ponies saying stuff about building things and whatnot, and needs a real ending.
Since I have a busy day ahead of me I can't get any more done, but I will do in the future, because I like where it's going.
Enjoy what you can of it.
Going for the epic creation feel here. Not complete currently, so not so great. Maybe check it out a day or two from now before voting!?!?!
What an original title...
Also, I'm third again! I'm becoming predictable... D=
Anyway, I decided to go with the world being created in a kind of violent way, mountains crashing into each other, the earth cracking at your feet, the ground rippling as it takes the form of Equestria. Then, once the mass amounts of shape shifting has done, the first ponies emerge and...well, that's a different story!
Also, I have new vsts! I'm still learning how to use them effectively, but I think I did a pretty good job!
This piece is heavily based off of Bizet's Carmen, as Overkillius and I pretty much just got out of it.
Transposition from the beginning to the near end was done manually, so I apologize for mistakes.
Also, the mood of the theme changes. I have a little bit of a story that runs alongside it. But listen, and see what you can come up with!
"How was Equestria made?"
"You silly filly, heat, dust, and gravity. Celestia is only a demigod, astrophysics came first."
I'm not gonna lie, this was an old concept I made a while ago. Touched it up last minute for this compo.